This picture looks like it was shot from the hip. The tops of the heads are cut and they are both cut at the ankles. It would have been better if we could have seen the policeman's expression. Try not to cut peoples heads in picture and try to avoid cutting them at the joints. I think your idea was good. Check out the work of Gary Winograd and his street photography.
Me encanta. Entiendo lo que dice el Sr. Herbert y respeto su opinion, pero esta imagen trabaja muy bien para mi. Me agrada mucho el trabajo de Winogrand, pero no somos Winogrand y cada uno desarolla su propio estilo. Esta imagen trabaja perfectamente para mi. La atención esta donde lo querias: las niñas. Bien logrado.